The Last Day

We looked over the rail of the lanai and silently watched the ripples of clouds gathering in the morning sky.

Rain, on the last day of our trip to paradise.

He looked at me and smiled. Nothing was going to ruin this day.

We packed our lunches, towels and a change of clothes. He stuffed the bright orange parkas into the backpack.

As we stepped out of the tour bus and heard the crashing of the waves. We felt the first drops of rain pelting on the rustling palm leaves.

We grasped hands and ran, laughing, to the water’s edge. NOTHING was going to ruin this day.

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  1. 1

    boomiebol said,

    Awww…sweet ending

  2. 3

    stuff I said said,

    Love it, as boomie said…sweet ending!

  3. 4

    Nicole said,

    Ah, the last day of being on vacation – we struggle to savor every last second. I think you post really captured that feeling. Glad to see those raindrops didn’t get in your way.

  4. 7

    Sounds like a beautiful day. :)

  5. 8

    Sandra Bennett said,

    Sounds like a place I’d like to be… Any vacation would do, even in the rain !! My vacations tend to come through reading…so, I thank you
    beebee !! : )

  6. 9

    Sandra said,

    A convincing snapshot of a moment in time, and in a relationship. Nice work.

  7. 12

    journalplace said,

    Good choice.

  8. 13

    Very nice. I enjoyed the mini vacation.
    I’m #18 on the list.

  9. 14

    I loved living the landscape with you. Well done.

  10. 15

    Cheerful message. We can decide to have a great day no matter what is going on externally.

    http://ebooksscifi.wordpress.com/2012/08/31/fallout-copyright-2012-ilyan-kei-lavanway/

  11. 16

    flyoverhere said,

    Very sweet and romantic! I ‘Like’ a lot!

  12. 18

    how lovely to read something so happy. I can see them smiling!

  13. 20

    Good for them! I’m glad I kept reading to get here. :-)

  14. 21

    Ahhh…a delightful snapshot on the last day of vacation. I love rain so I’m sure I would do the same thing. I’m 29 on the list.

  15. 22

    beebee, you as well as anyone understands the true meaning of ” cherish every moment ” ! What a happy, sweet way to top off a vacation! I bet that will be the one day that stays in your memory. And I love love love the photo!!!

  16. 23

    MyTwiceBakedPotato said,

    Love your style! Have noticed that you and discover and devour comment on each other’s posts…have you heard from her since July 30th?
    Boomie Bol and My twice Baked potato bloggers both concerned for her…
    Please email mytwicebakedpotato@yahoo.com
    Thank you!!

    • 24

      beebeesworld said,

      Ti be honest, I do not remember hearing from Discover and Devour. It seems that if you haven’t I probably havent either. If you do hear from their blog, I’d live to know. I think it is wonderful how fellow bloggers care about eachother.beebeesworld

  17. 25

    This is such a wonderful story. I wish it had happened to me!

    • 26

      beebeesworld said,

      frank, you aren’t that old-and the people you write about, or collect photos, etc don’t even have to be “your” own! So many older folks are excited to tell their stories, let you photograph their memories-items.
      I bet in Germany, there a so many stories to be told. If someone doesnt do it, they will be lost. Check around where senior citizens may be. Ask around and see if someone you knows might have an idea. My dad got a lot of his World war II stories like this. Hope all is well. beebee

  18. 27

    legionwriter said,

    What a liberating view. We in our culture are so apt to whine rather than see challenges as only minor obstacles to greater joy.


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