All Washed Up

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He chased her down the beach laughing, catching her as she ran. He panted, then laughed, “I didn’t think I was going to catch you after all my planning!”

She looked down , suddenly realizing what was happening and gasped..

“You make me feel like the wild winds of the ocean.” he smiled as he put the ring on her hand. “I have no doubt that I want to spend every minute of my life with you., will you marry me?”

With the ring safely on her finger, they danced in the waves.

“Oh, my God!” “Oh my God!” She cried. The ring was gone.

Suddenly a wave washed up between her searching hands. Something sparkling amidst the shells. She grabbed the ring and smiled up at him, “I forgot to say, ‘I will, she laughed.”

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21 Responses so far »

  1. 1

    I think that ring needs to be sized, but what a relief that she found it! Now it will make a good story instead of a sad one.
    janet

  2. 2

    Jan Brown said,

    Lovely story! This had a much happier ending than a video I saw recently. The boyfriend proposed on an outcropping of rock as the tide came in. They both got knocked into the water! They managed to pull each other out of the ocean, but I’m not sure what happened to the ring…epic fail.

  3. 3

    Carrie said,

    Glad they found the ring!! Cute story

  4. 5

    Sandra Bennett said,

    That was a close one !!!

  5. 6

    Lucid Gypsy said,

    Wonderfully romantic!

  6. 8

    Joe Owens said,

    He knew how to thrill her and she almost blew it. Glad she was able to find it.

  7. 9

    Shreyank said,

    glad the ring came back. the second story i have read this week without the wasp. Nice ! :)

  8. 10

    Nice story and I’m glad it had a happy ending. My friend lost his wedding ring at beach once and he wasn’t so lucky.

  9. 11

    Anne Orchard said,

    Glad his planning had a happy ending. His romantic nature bodes well for their future.

  10. 12

    Mystikel said,

    This was fun and lively. I am so glad for her that she found the ring!

  11. 13

    A sweet, tender tale that left me smiling. Well done.
    Shalom,
    Rochelle

  12. 14

    Sandra said,

    So romantic! lucky lady.

  13. 15

    rgayer55 said,

    That was a nice, feel good story. It made me smile.

  14. 16

    Dilip said,

    Gripping narration. Getting the ring back is a divine coincidence heralding everlasting love :)
    Thanks.

  15. 17

    So happy, and I love that end… Of course she had to say yes.

  16. 18

    Oh, that was a close call with the ring! I loved the happiness and the rushing waves. You put me right there in the scene.

  17. 19

    Geraldine said,

    oh, close call. tres romantic!

  18. 20

    A nice story of hope. Thank you.

  19. 21

    Lindy Lee said,

    Happy ending well done…


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