The rain splashes down on the skillet-hot pavement
steam rises from the street, making its own fog.
A sharp bolt of lightning, way too close,
followed by window rattling thunder crash.
Sunday afternoon, my back throbbing,
I lay exhausted, listening to the storm.
Wondering if the heat, the fire, the thunder
is coming from outside me or within.
I walk slowly to the door to look out again.
The sun is peeking around a cloud,
I see a coal black cat dash by.
It’s so quiet, I can hear the grass rustling.
I knew the answer anyway, I sigh.
The thunder in my soul will always
frighten away the storm outside.
Robyn Lee said,
July 23, 2012 @ 4:44 am
Excellent writing beebee – I agree – powerful!
David Stewart said,
July 23, 2012 @ 10:17 am
I love thunderstorms. I find them exciting and relaxing at the same time. I love the description here. I can really feel it all.
Sandra Bennett said,
July 23, 2012 @ 1:31 pm
Very descriptive…great writing !
kathryningrid said,
July 24, 2012 @ 1:25 am
Beautiful and evocative. 🙂
beebeesworld said,
July 26, 2012 @ 2:40 am
Thank you for reading and for the thoughtful comment!
readinpleasure said,
July 24, 2012 @ 11:51 pm
powerful, so evocative.