A Ruined Debut

She looked beautiful in her solid black outfit. Her skirt was covered with a lacy, low-cut blouse, her shoes, glimmered with glittery shine. It had been so long since she had been out. Her illness had kept her from feeling like being seen in public. She felt like she was making a “debut”’ of sorts.

The bar was noisy and crowded. Then, she saw an old friend across the room and rushed over to him. Suddenly, she felt the string on her skirt being pulled. As her skirt fell down, she screamed at the stranger, “You dirty, underhanded fool!”


7 Responses so far »

  1. 1

    A bit of Carrie in this?

  2. 2

    Sandra Bennett said,

    Why, that scoundrel !!!

  3. 3

    simon7banks said,

    Sounds like she can handle it – a successful debut after all. Unless, of course, “debut” is a pun.

  4. 4

    silently Kim said,

    After getting the courage to go out. SMH good story.

  5. 5

    nutsfortreasure said,


  6. 6

    Eeesh, what a way to make an entrance back into the public eye!

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